The Brotherhood by Lawrence R Deering
My rating: 3 of 5 stars
Well devised religious plot with considerable potential. I could tell the characters were given thought but I found the story a bit rough to read. The way it was written felt as though it was an outline being worked into a flowing novel. There is still work to be done on the way it reads and transitions between scenes. Also, I’m not sure if it’s an editing thing done for theft prevention or what, but my copy had terrible editing with missing letters and chapters starting mid paragraph.
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